hai-ku?


You and me

Hot and sweaty –

Moving furniture.

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5 Comments

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5 responses to “hai-ku?

  1. It’s a lovely little Hai-kyun ( as in why are we moving the furniture anyway?)
    Too short to be a haiku, though.( 17 syllballes, metre of 5, 7, 5)

  2. syllables, sorry for the typo.

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